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Greetings! I want to present you pre-alpha build of our upcoming VN game. Developing such project for the first time, we need your feedback to correct our current vector. The main goal is - testing of the narrative part, but I’ll be happy to hear your thoughts on different aspects too!
Please, note that this build is still pretty far from planed final version. You will encounter some placeholder images, interface elements and other materials. Also, it’s worth mentioning – current build is optimized (well, if I can use this word ><) for 16:9 and 16:10 types of display resolution.
So, to begin with just grab the torrent file with the game and give it a try. You can do it via the attachment or from
Nya torrents /
Mega link
After this, feel free to post any thoughts you have! Don’t try to be polite, we know, this game has it’s problems. So, you can point out, which of them felt more important to you. If you have trouble placing your impression into a more specific form, you can use my questions as a guideline line:
Narrative part:
1) Napping in the process? No, srsly. This is the first attempt in more or less serious home-brew narrative for this project.
2) How difficult it was to read? Most weak moments in the narrative in your opinion.
3) Was the story at least somewhat engaging? Do you want to know what’s next?
Art part:
1) How does the art feel? I know, it’s kinda strange compared to standard anime drawing, but we wanted to make it feel unique.
2) General thoughts on characters in the dialogue part. Character details, general appeal, moving, etc.
3) What about the combat part?
Sound and music part:
1) Any thoughts on musical setting? Which tracks felt out of place?
2) Right atmosphere while reading means a lot. Was our music a distraction to you or was it just right?
3) Aside from the narrative part, how combat music and sound fit in?
Thanks a lot! Feel free to break any of these questions into more detailed versions.
